Echoes - Page 4

for Attolia

Windows

as i step into the window
i forget the things i don't know
i remember you remember
all the words that make me tender

one time i follwed the rabbit
down the hole now it's a habit
if they want it they can take it
if they laugh then it's a lesson

being poor i have my dreams
i spread my dreams across your feet
can't you please tread softly
for your treading on my dreams

as i leap out of the window
crash, splash, mashed i've broken my bones
coming down i feel your feelings
think that now i am believing

i remember my intention
is to teach you of my message
this attempt of my discretion
brings me down and gives me pleasure

one time i follwed the rabbit
down the hole now it's a habit
if you want it they can take it
if you laugh then it's a lesson

Must be your skin that I'm sinkin in
Must be for real cause now I can feel
and I didn't mind
it's not my kind
not my time to wonder why
everything's gone white
and everything's grey
now your here now you away
I don't want this
remember that
I'll never forget where your at
don't let the days go by
glycerine

I'm never alone
I'm alone all the time
are you at one
or do you lie
we live in a wheel
where everyone steals
but when we rise it's like strawberry fields

If I treated you bad
you bruise my face
couldn't love you more
you got a beautiful taste
don't let the days go by
could have been easier on you
I coudn't change though I wanted to
could have been easier by three
our old friend fear and you and me
glycerine (repeat)
don't let the days go by
glycerine

I needed you more
when we wanted us less
I could not kiss just regress
it might just be
clear simple and plain
that's just fine
that's just one of my names
don't let the days go by
could've been easier on you
glycerine

Bush- Glycerine

Tasteless

wow its amasing
how you understand me
how you think you got me
all figured out

hey geuss im crazy
i geuss im insane see
i thought i was being
completly freindly

your not a real person
you dont think for yourself
your judgement is hardly
existent with reason

your sleazy, your a tool
your society's fool
you think that you matter
your not a real person

you cant convey
you cant portrait
you cant accept that
you like what you feel

embarrased immature
you trolling your life now
amazing
how little you know

you say that you get it
repeat the same sentences
eveybody else did
the truth is that very few know

afraid that your stupid
you are, so are they
your not even people
you cant even think

you think that im smart and
you think that im so weird
you just cant admit that
you want to be me

im free in all of
the ways you are not
i walk like want to
i talk like you can't

you have no evidence
simply your ignorance
your not a real person
you cant even think

When He Says Hayley

and she says maybe
maybe your wrong
and how do you know
you don't know
your hurting me

well somethings wrong with me you can taste it
and its so strong
and some ones got to knock me out my mind so i don't think like this
anymore anymore

and i'll say maybe
sadly i might be right
and faith is crazy
crazy
'cause i can't stop
no i can't stop hurting you
i can't stop hurting you
i can't stop
and i can't stop
i care

so crazy i need to be
put down in my prime
this can't be my prime
this can't be my pride

working against you
and me
working so strong to releive me of my
heart

then she says maybe
maybe she's weak
her tears are way too much
there way to
there way to much for me

and i
hate myself again
why am i so...no

and she says maybe i don't need
your cure
and i'll say maybe
well maybe
you don't


i REALLY like this one

I like the one you have labled "Attempt #2" that we sang together, "She's hopeful...I'm playful.."

Also, that was fun with Sophomore Slump Or Come Back Of The Year outside of the pizza place

Nice work on all of them

- Xaej

That was an awesome poem, Gmunk. Especially because I've been thinking about that lately.

You should write a poem about the next stages your narrator goes through. It'd be sad to see it end here because the narrator doesn't seem satisified with his/her own answers. Again, that's left up to you, but I;d love to see where you'd take this.

ok i placed it in a new thread "Just a poem..."

Christmas Carol

nervously awaiting
all the crowd and imitating
the practices were all for nothing
friday night my stomach's turning
i'm feeling nervous
i can't wait
just to see
your pretty face
i wonder if you'll want to talk
tell me stories on and on
sevens coming
so are you
still i'm wanting
just to puke
if i'm not nervious
its not fun
hope to god
you show up
getting nervous
getting nervous
getting nervous

Nice. It makes me nervous just reading it. Why name it Christmas Carol though?

i was in a play called A Christams Carol, by charles dickens

this night, walk the dead
in a solitary style
and crash the cemetery gates.
in the dress your husband hates
way down, mark the grave
where the search lights find us
drinking by the mausoleum door
and they found you on the bathroom floor

i miss you, i miss you so far
and the collision of your kiss that made it so hard

back home, off the run
singing songs that make you slit your wrists
it isn't that much fun, staring down a loaded gun
so i won't stop dying, won't stop lying
if you want i'll keep on crying
did you get what you deserve?
is this what you always want me for?

i miss you, i miss you so far
and the collision of your kiss that made it so hard

way down, way down
way down, way down
way down, way down
way down, way down

i miss you, i miss you so far
and the collision of your kiss that made it so hard

when will i miss you, when will i miss you so far
and the collision of your kiss that made it so hard
made it so hard

way down, way down
way down, way down
way down, way down
way down, way down

way down

My Chemical Romance- Cemetery Drive

The World Goes Round

desperate little boys
clinging to their mother
desperate little boys
their loved ones always smothered

desperate little girls
willing to do any thing
desperate little girls
crying when they feel no pain

average big boys
clinging to their wants
average big boys
substitue love with blunts

average big girls
clinging for attention
average big girls
not conveying their message

silly little society
immature and stale
silly little society
who's mask wearing life is pale

adolecent norm
you make me grind my teeth
adolecent norm
i will destroy your turning wheels

vengfull sage
who is far from his title
venfull sage
who denies that he is spitefull

disgusting little liar
your far worse than them all
disgusting little liar
i'd love to let you fall

peacfull fairy of the lake
helps me through at safer rates
peacfull fairy of the lake
makes me moan and think

angry family prince
first born with good intentions
angry family prince
has become what he hates

holy family
hell is at your door step
holy family
forgetfull of their stone path

little boys
and little girls
never grow up
yet inhabit the world

you make me think
of things i hate
i cant get the images
out of my head

my heart is heavy
my head is throbing
my mind is quick
my mouth is quicker
my life is useless
my love is dumb
my life is useless
like the rest of the world
i am fucked

That's one of your best. I like it a lot.

thank you

You've got awesome one-liners. Every stanza can do well just on its own.