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 36yrs • M •  A CTL of 1 means that lastresort is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.  |
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Tears |
please give me input / your interpretation
Tears
Tears, shed from pain.
pain of mind;
pain of body;
pain of heart.
Fall like the moon.
Falling slowly;
Falling surely;
Leaving behind light
Light of relief;
Light of joy;
Light of tomorrow;
Tears, shed from light.
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36yrs • M A CTL of 1 means that awakendwraith is a contributing member of Captain Cynic. |
i like it. nothing grand but its sweet and brings comfort. i think anyway. i like how it resolves. i sometimes try to do that in my poetry but only come up with more qeustions.
goodstuff.
3:25:42 am - February 15, 2006
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"Why cry for those that often cry? Instead, help them smile, and smile for those that smile."
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37yrs • F • A CTL of 1 means that mindfields19 is a contributing member of Captain Cynic. |
ditch the semicolons.
3:31:11 am - February 15, 2006
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"In the beginning, night was memory was water, and in the cool aquamarine depths dreams swam freely."
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