Please check my poems out

i just want someone to rate these. these arent my best but just some of my poems that i wrote and posted at the evil myspace

i like haikus
but others can suffice
outbreak :title

outbreak on san fran bridge
no one fell off the ridge
lil boy in a cage
he cant feel the rage

rage runs wild thru town
everyones eyes are brown
normality rain supreme
until i break the scene

like a cure to disease
i make you fall to your knees
thank the lord your soul
safe and sound in this hole


bloody shrouds :title

is it my fate
to always hate
lifes true sorrow
on which i borrow

if i speak
out of my beak
they will break me
down to a tee

mabye i should die
when trying to fly
on empty clouds
past dark shrouds

i lost my hate
mabye its my fate
to always forget
and not in ill fit