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29yrs • M •
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We are the hollow men We are the stuffed men Leaning together Headpiece filled with straw. Alas! Our dried voices, when We whisper together Are quiet and meaningless As wind in dry grass Or rats' feet over broken glass In our dry cellar Shape without form, shade without colour, Paralysed force, gesture without motion; Those who have crossed With direct eyes, to death's other Kingdom Remember us-if at all-not as lost Violent souls, but only As the hollow men The stuffed men. Eyes I dare not meet in dreams In death's dream kingdom These do not appear: There, the eyes are Sunlight on a broken column There, is a tree swinging And voices are In the wind's singing More distant and more solemn Than a fading star. Let me be no nearer In death's dream kingdom Let me also wear Such deliberate disguises Rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves In a field Behaving as the wind behaves No nearer- Not that final meeting In the twilight kingdom This is the dead land This is cactus land Here the stone images Are raised, here they receive The supplication of a dead man's hand Under the twinkle of a fading star. Is it like this In death's other kingdom Waking alone At the hour when we are Trembling with tenderness Lips that would kiss Form prayers to broken stone. The eyes are not here There are no eyes here In this valley of dying stars In this hollow valley This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms In this last of meeting places We grope together And avoid speech Gathered on this beach of the tumid river Sightless, unless The eyes reappear As the perpetual star Multifoliate rose Of death's twilight kingdom The hope only Of empty men. Here we go round the prickly pear Prickly pear prickly pear Here we go round the prickly pear At five o'clock in the morning. Between the idea And the reality Between the motion And the act Falls the Shadow For Thine is the Kingdom Between the conception And the creation Between the emotion And the response Falls the Shadow Life is very long Between the desire And the spasm Between the potency And the existence Between the essence And the descent Falls the Shadow For Thine is the Kingdom For Thine is Life is For Thine is the kingdom This is the way the world ends This is the way the world ends This is the way the world ends Not with a bang but a whimper.
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"All the world's a stage. And all the men and women are merely players."
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39yrs • M •
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TheHollowMen275, great work! Your grasp of meter and rhythm is spectacular, and your imagery is fantastic. It seems today that conviction is something that blares from my television screen as another scumbag is send to the cage. It's connotation is now ruin; politician's fall and murderer's rap but I see conviction in another light. Today, when we convict, we ask questions and by building a story put out a jury on the answer. Very few stand and say "It was me. I did it." They cower behind suits and excuses, and pray that not enough semen was left behind to nail them. But conviction to me is not a prosecution but when the witness on the stand says with unwavering tones "this is wrong." and no matter how the suit pries with the screwdriver, the bolt does not lose grip of the steel. Conviction's connotation should be that of honesty and honor, not its action. For today as I leave the courthouse, it seems to me there are far too many lawyers and not a lot of people who know exactly what they believe.
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""As I sit before the fire, I wonder how many before myself have been burned.'"
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29yrs • M •
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Vortex271, I wish I could claim that to be mine own, however, i thought this thread was not only for your own works but also for inspiring poetry, and so i posted some George Herbert and T.S Elliot. i take no credit for these magnificent poems.
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"All the world's a stage. And all the men and women are merely players."
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39yrs • F •
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My role, patient advocate. My title, basic guardian. My job... My job... I don't know anymore. I'm supposed to speak for the patient, but rarely, if ever, is there someone to listen. My moral beliefs tested each shift as I'm surrounded by incompetence. Lives pulled forward over thin lines of survival, as I watch from the other end hoping no one falls over. Each shift wondering if this is all a joke to them, and if so, where's the punch line because I'm sure as hell not laughing. Witnessing the implosion of a strong will and moral mind, and noticing the destruction is stuck on slow motion, his smile broken. A minor bleed goes unnoticed, a grand event awaits, with an all too familiar ending; our hearts grow enraged at their nonchalant attitude. Why won't they stop to listen? Why don't they care? The same thought keeps popping up, one day those automatic double doors will open and as I pull forward the ground will make it hard to advance. The load grows heavier and heavier the farther I go. It begins to overflow and I start to run over them. Nameless bodies that will just end up forgotten, I'm surrounded by them. No matter whom I talk to or how much help I ask for, we're made to hold. Knee deep in frustration and anger, I begin to drown, struggling to keep both me and the countless of nameless bodies afloat. One by one, no matter how much I fight, they fall. Each face forgotten, with countless diagnosis overlooked. The money keeps them going as their ethics and moral compass are tossed aside, leaving a faint mark of where it once stood before. It never ends.
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"What a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive"
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39yrs • M •
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I often wondered why haikus exist today. It's busy writers. I need more time to write!
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""As I sit before the fire, I wonder how many before myself have been burned.'"
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57yrs • M
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Nice poems neutered by nature!
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29yrs • M •
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Are you hungry? Are you sick? Are you begging for a break? Are you sweet? Are you fresh? Are you strung up by the wrist? We want the young blood. Are you fracturing? Are you torn at the seams? Would you do anything? Flea-bitten? moth eaten? We suck young blood. We suck young blood. Won't let the creeping ivy. Won't let the nervous bury me. Our veins are thin, Our rivers poisoned. We want the sweet meats. We want young blood.
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"All the world's a stage. And all the men and women are merely players."
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*Smiles with in Solitude* - Page 14 |
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