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Another school sonate, it took to my inner emotions...

What I have written death cannot take
Nor fade that special sparkle in your eyes
From God, hath her pen, the stars she did make
I take that pen, and build you in the black sky,
Your translucent eyes shall forever shine
Your smile so content will never fade
Your flawless complexion shall be enshrined
Your myriad virtues, the sky will portray.
The Earth can yield me but a common grave
Eons pass when I in Earth am asleep
Doomed to be forgotten yet you are saved.
Death fated, my soul the reaper will reap
Through the darkness your soul will gallantly shine
For you are immortal and death... is mine.

oh yeah i wrote this, it was not a poem i found...

thats some great stuff there, write more!

heh.. i wish i could write on command, then maybe i would become a poet. When another one pops in my head, i will be sure to post it. Thanks for the kind words.

i wrote this, for my love, who i hope to see again.

Winter Wonderland

I went lonely, the cold a bitter sweet
Shall love be a goddess, no man can see?
Solitude my partner, lay alone to sleep.
Loneliness runs through us daily.

Love sighted your soul shins ever so bright.
Like a phoenix being reborn in snow
My frigid soul, your essence did ignite
Love runs through us daily.

Now I, in your arms what better place to be?
Thou art so perfect, like a new spring day
You are a gift from god, an angle I did see.
Peace runs through us daily.

Those three days with you seamed to never end
Yet Past they did, with the blink of an eye
Now we are apart, will our love transcend?
Pain runs through us daily...

you should show that to her next time ya see her

i have written it down as an e-mail and gave it to her. I got her message back and her reply is that it is so true and beautiful... you dont even know how good it feels. She called me her sun in the morning and her moon at night....